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Thus, effective activism on the issue of women's political representation has to operate either within the main political parties or directed at the parties most often via other established organisations which operate within or in close association with a political party such as Trade Unions and government agencies (Lovenduski, 2013).
asked May 02 '14 at 12:25 davin New member

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