bankruptcy is a crime and his father does not want to servr a jail term so they migrate to the united state and settled in queens New York.
In her country South Korean, bankruptcy is a crime and his father doesn't want to serve a jail term so they migrate to the United States and settled in queens New York.
South Korea is the country, and a South Korean is a person from that country. People either emigrate FROM a country or immigrate TO another country. 'Migrate' has a different meaning. You write 'her country' but then write 'his father'. These should both refer to the same gender. 'Queens' should be capitalized and followed by a comma. I broke the sentences up in a different place than Sanjay.
I don't think all bankruptcies are crimes in South Korea, but I'll not address that.
In her country of South Korea, bankruptcy is a crime. Her father didn't want to serve a jail term, so they immigrated to the United States and settled in Queens, New York.
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