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I give some watermelons for the lion to eat because it can make him feel cooler.  Then, the lion feels good to go out with me to hunt for more food.  Finally, we will have a delicious meal.

 

edited Apr 15 '14 at 04:11 Paula Lui New member

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My first thought, also, was that lions don't eat watermelons, but I googled 'lions eating watermelon' and got a lot of pictures of lions eating watermelons. 

link comment answered Apr 15 '14 at 14:32 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow
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according to him, he went here at site to returned back for work since he was came from the vacation

link comment answered Apr 16 '14 at 16:59 Jerome Rubrico New member
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The lion is a non-veg. It does not eat watermelons.
To quench the thirst of the lion, I offer it some watermelons to keep its body cool. Then, the lion feels good and comes out with me to hunt for more food. Finally, we will have a delicious meal.

link comment answered Apr 16 '14 at 17:29 Sanjay Expert

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