Please check if the following sentences are correct?

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Please check if the following sentences are correct?

Thank you!

 

 

I give Lion to eat some watermelons because it can make him feel cooler.  Then Lion feels good to go out with me to hunt more food.  Finally, we will have a delicious meal. 

edited Apr 14 at 15:48 Paula Lui New member

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There are a couple problems. How to correct the sentence depends on whether you are using "Lion" as a proper noun (such as "Paula") or an ordinary noun (such as "a lion," or "a bear"). I'll assume you're using it as a proper noun. Also, the verb tense is a little confusing. Do these actions take place in the present, or in the future? I'll assume in the present because that's how you have written it (although that is a little strange).

I recommend this:

I give Lion some watermelons to eat because they make him feel cooler. Then Lion feels well enough to go out with me to hunt more food. Then, we will have a delicious meal.

link comment answered Apr 14 at 18:05 Roger New member
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I gave watermelons to Lion because it makes him feel cooler.Then the Line feels well enough to go out with me to hunt more food.Then ,we will have delicious meal.

link comment answered Apr 19 at 05:00 saba New member

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