What's wrong with this sentence?


What is wrong with the following sentence: "Bob is a curious person, collecting things." My instinct tells me that the correct version of this sentence would be "Bob is a curious person who collects things" but I'm not sure a) if I'm correct or b) what, technically, makes the first version incorrect. Can anyone help?

participle progressive asked Apr 08 '14 at 19:10 Eddie New member

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link comment answered Apr 09 '14 at 21:28 Adalgiza Diaz New member

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