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Dear Dad,

 

Tomorrow is Mum’s birthday.  She will hold a birthday party at home. I want to make some fruit salad, please go to the market to buy some apples, peaches, pineapples and bananas.  You can also get some potato chips, biscuits, chocolate bars, soft drinks and cookies from the supermarket.  At last, please collect the birthday cake from ABC cake shop.  I hope Mum will have a good time on her birthday.

 

                                                                                                            With thanks,

                                                                                                                 

                                                                                                              Amy

edited Apr 03 at 15:35 Paula Lui New member

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Tomorrow is Mum’s birthday.  She will hold a birthday party at home. I want to make some fruit salad. Please go to the market and buy some apples, peaches, pineapples and bananas.  You can also get some potato chips, biscuits, chocolate bars, soft drinks and cookies from the supermarket.  Finally, please collect the birthday cake from ABC cake shop.  I hope Mum will have a good time on her birthday.  

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