This is a research article
Can some one help me out in this
If no action is taken it will result in a significant risk of geometrical miss and overdose to the organs at risk.
You need a comma after your introductory phrase. Result is a word that doesn't quite fit for me when you are talking about risk. Risk means that the future result is unknown. You need to find a way to avoid the repetition of the work risk. I am not sure I understand the context of your sentence (what does geometrical miss mean?), so my suggestion might hange your meaning.
If no action is taken, certain organs will have a significant risk of geometrical miss or overdose.
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