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Some instructional strategies geared to addressing race in a more constructive fashion in grades 9-12 in HPE are: 1) Using collaborative and cooperative learning groups and 2) active learning.

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Some instructional strategies geared to addressing race in a more constructive fashion in grades 9-12 in HPE are: 1) Using collaborative and cooperative learning groups and 2) active learning.
asked Mar 17 at 05:36 Delores New member

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If you're asking about correcting punctuation, then you need to delete the colon after "are" and use BOTH parts of the parentheses (1).  However, the even with those punctuation errors fixed, the sentence still is a bit cumbersome and awkward.

link comment answered Mar 18 at 01:11 Dr. G Contributor

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