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Paul, I am finishing a short, sports-massage course and would like to ask a favour. To complete my coursework, I need to undertake a case study. I hope that you will agree to participate. If you agree, I will give you a complimentary massage. Your body type is ideal for the practical course component, and this practice will enhance my skills. I understand you have a convenient massage room facility at the Stadium; could we use it? After the message, I would like to hear your feedback. Please let me know if you could do this for me. If you accept my offer, it would remain confidential and between gentlemen. Cheers, Rayan

asked Apr 15 '12 at 18:41 RAYAN New member

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