Quitting smoking thesis sentence. It needs parallelism, and I am struggling to restructure it.


Making the commitment to stop smoking, and knowing what your options are, gives you the best chance of quitting and staying smoke free for life.

asked Mar 08 '14 at 19:38 Kathleen Mazzie New member

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The sentence is parallel, but "you" and "your" should be avoided in an academic paper.

link comment answered Mar 09 '14 at 07:14 Dr. G Contributor

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