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While some argue that there should be a ban on mobile phone use in public areas due to its dangers, however, it must be provided in public spaces to assist in emergency situations.
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Some argue that mobile phone use in public areas can be dangerous and should be banned. However, phone use must be provided in public spaces to assist in emergency situations.

link comment answered Mar 06 at 17:21 Alexis Campbell Jansky New member

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