Why does it question my use of the word like?

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This is a report based on watching the movie Saving Private Ryan.

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Saving Private Ryan is an exceptional example of Spielberg's trademark directing as he makes the audience feel like they are part of the story.
asked Apr 14 '12 at 03:15 ekadel New member

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Like is a preposition and as is a conjuction.  A prepositional phrase does not include a verb.  Since you have a phrase that includes a verb, you should use a conjunction.

 

He makes the audience feel as if they are part of the story.

 

You can use like if you get rid of the verb. 

 

He makes the audience feel like a part of the story.

link answered Apr 14 '12 at 05:25 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

Wouldn't like be an adverb modifying feel?

TolleyApr 15 '12 at 02:53

I don't think so. The definition of like as an adverb is nearly, closely, or probably. As a preposition, it means in the manner characteristic of; resembling.

Patty TApr 15 '12 at 03:09

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Well, they consider like a preposition.  They want you to try another connecting word like "as."  "That" might also work here.  I like how you have it, though it is probably wrong.

link edited Apr 14 '12 at 07:31 Courtney Contributor

Wow, with your comment being as correct as it is, and getting a down-vote, I'm not going to bother to answer.

Tony ProanoApr 14 '12 at 05:27

Don't feel bad. We win some, we lose some.

CourtneyApr 14 '12 at 07:30

Don't let it bother you, Tony. Maybe it was because Courtney said her answer was probably wrong? (shrug)

Patty TApr 15 '12 at 03:11

I think it was my initial uncertainty in my original wording. Some people mistake honest uncertainty for weakness, when I consider it honest and noble. At least you only lose 2 points for each thumb down, but gain 10 for each thumb up.

CourtneyApr 15 '12 at 06:32

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