Are the commas in this sentence correct?
He lost his teeth, a loss that caused him to wear dentures that were uncomfortable, and at times, painful.
Our thought is that there is an interruption with a parethetical (nonessential clause), followed by a adjectival clause, and then an emphasis on the word "pain".
Can the sentence be written like this given the cited rationale?
Hero of the day
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