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Sellers! Want to get the most out of your sales ? There is no better place than wozing.com to showcase your items whether they are unique or ordinary stuff.

english grammar phase asked Apr 12 '12 at 10:50 themihai New member

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In my opinion it would be better to make 'sales' singular i.e. 'sale' and to remove 'stuff'.

I hope it keeps the desired meaning.

link comment answered Apr 12 '12 at 11:11 Rahul Gupta Expert
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I agree with Rahul about stuff, but I would keep sales plural.  Making it singular implies that only one sale is allowed. 

 

I would put a comma after items to indicate the slight pause before whether.  I think I would add the understood Do you to the first sentence, as well. --> Do you want to get the most out of your sales?

link comment answered Apr 12 '12 at 11:57 Jody M. Expert

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