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I truly believe that Louis Riel should have been pardoned because he was merely trying to defend the Metis people's rights
Your sentence is written using passive voice. There is nothing really wrong with that. But if you want to change it, you may need to introduce another noun and change the order a little.
"I truly believe that the court should have pardoned Louis Riel because he was merely trying to defend the Metis people's rights."
You can change court with whoever had the ability to grant him a pardon such as the governor or whatever body of government.
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