how should this be worded

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it is a run on in grammarly.

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In conclusion, I believe that the Illinois is no more equipped than California to handle the demand of illegal immigrations.
asked Feb 09 at 21:55 lachele davis New member

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You don't need an article before Illinois

 

The word more should be better.  Someone might have more equipment, but they are better equipped or well equipped.

 

Immigration is an uncountable noun.  You do not add an s to make it plural. 

 

In conclusion, I believe that Illinois is no better equipped than California for handling the demand of illegal immigration.

link comment answered Feb 09 at 23:20 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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