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If I was a coach of a football team, I have to show positive leadership daily by being transparent with my players, school, media, and fans whereas this would hopefully transition throughout the NCAA football.

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If I was a coach of a football team, I have to show positive leadership daily by being transparent with my players, school, media, and fans whereas this would hopefully transition throughout the NCAA football.
asked Feb 09 '14 at 20:01 Reginald Jackson New member

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