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“Castle of Shadows” sets in a castle in Quale. Quale is a sizeable kingdom, full of shanty towns and warehouses. Towns swarmed around the city like an epidemic. The whiff of the air fills your nose with an unpleasant smell. Outside the castle grounds leaves a trails of decaying leaves and old rusty stools. The Castle, that is the size of Godzilla, is a maze full of mystery and surprise. Full of tunnels, passageways and dungeons, easily to get lost in! 

asked Feb 09 '14 at 08:51 Dileesha New member

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It mostly makes sense, but there are several errors. Do you just want to communicate, or do you want the language to be correct?

link answered Feb 11 '14 at 07:33 Julia Day New member

Language please

DileeshaNov 20 '14 at 11:07

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