Does this sentence make sense?

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"You only speak about crap like you guys getting cash."

 

 

I'm writing a story and i want the main character to say that he is sick of his friends always talking about getting money. 

edited Feb 08 at 16:55 jon New member

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I can make sense of your sentence. It is very informal, but would be okay if used as dialogue spoken by a character.

link answered Feb 08 at 12:34 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

I'm writing a story and i want the main character to say that he is sick of his friends always talking about getting money. I know its very informal, But does it make sense?

jonFeb 08 at 21:48

As I said, Jon, I can make sense of this sentence and it is okay for dialogue.

Patty TFeb 08 at 22:20

Thank you very much sir.

jonFeb 08 at 22:44

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Jon, It is not very clear what exactly you want to communicate. Can you meake it more clear?

link answered Feb 08 at 10:39 Gijumon New member

I'm writing a story and i want the main character to say that he is sick of his friends always talking about getting money. I know its very informal, But does it make sense?

jonFeb 08 at 21:41

I'm writing a story and i want the main character to say that he is sick of his friends always talking about getting money. I know its very informal, But does it make sense?

jonFeb 08 at 21:41

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