pronoun agreement

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How can I make this sentence accurate?

See example:

Involving the family in the students' progress in the subject area can show the student how supportive everyone involved in his/her educational path are.
asked Feb 07 at 01:30 tina dress New member

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Hi Tina,

 

I must admit that I struggled a bit with this sentence, as I understand the importance of what you are trying to say. Following are two choices; I think that I like the second one the best. I hope this will be helpful to you!

 

1) The support of the student's family members will demonstrate the importance of his/her educational choices.

 

2) Family involvement is integral to the student's progress, as he/she will reap the benefits of their continual support.

 

All my best,

Karen   :D

link comment answered Feb 07 at 22:52 Karen OKeefe Contributor

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