Is "their" growing up together right? Should "high school" be captilized?

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Susan wrote a tribute to Charlotte, sharing memories of their growing up together, and sent it to their high school classmates.

asked Jan 23 at 04:40 Susan New member

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I would delete the first "their" in this sentence.  The reader can assume that memories of growing up together means Susan and Charlotte. 

link comment answered Jan 23 at 06:56 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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