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These statements tell me that she is now learning to be more independent and experienced on becoming a middle class teenager she is no longer living the rich life.

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These statements tell me that she is now learning to be more independent and experienced on becoming a middle class teenager she is no longer living the rich life.
asked Jan 19 at 22:08 dantracia jenkins New member

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I would delete 'experience' and change 'on' to 'is'.  You have a run on sentence and have to change something. I recommend ending the first sentence after 'teenager' and starting a new one.

 

These statements tell me that she is now learning to be more independent and is becoming a middle class teenager.  She is no longer living the rich life.

link comment answered Jan 19 at 22:46 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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