Preposition use, particularly at the end of sentences
I have a problem with preposition use, particularly at the end of sentences in the following example: “Vivaldi's religious music did more than fulfil his duties; it expanded his musical range in new directions and gave us a wider variety of music to listen to.”
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If this is a formal essay, consider changing 'variety of music to listen to' to 'variety of music to which we could listen.'
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answered Apr 05 '11 at 17:18
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