Essay

my 3 thesis statements are loyal,honest and caring. 

Loyalty is very important in the real friendship. Finding a loyal friend is not easy, who can show you devotion.You can easily share your secrates because they are trustworthy.Also, if you need help in any situation, they're always there for you and willing to do their best.

My teacher said that I have a transitions problem in body paragraph. I want to know how can I fix this?