Wordy Sentence?

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"I believe the stress management skills and many otherr experiences that I accumulated through work will be a great asset for my future research and work."

 

Grammarly check indicated it is a wordy sentence. I have difficulty to edit it. Thank you for your help.

edited Jan 15 at 16:26 AQ New member

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Hmmmmmm.... try some fancy punctuation!

 

"I believe that stress management skills, among other learning experiences that I have been exposed to through my work, will be a great asset for my future research projects and employments."

 

Try putting that in and see if it still says it is wordy--note that I even added some more wordiness!

 

Note 1: I keep sentences like this as close to the original as possible to assist people in seeing their errors.

Note 2: I do think that this sentence is too wordy and self-aggrandizing for such mundane skills as you are listing within it.

Note 3: HEYO!

link edited Jan 17 at 14:25 Aaron Prejean Expert

Thank you Aaron!

AQJan 17 at 23:49

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