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When talking about the warm weather of June in Spain, How could I frase this better.
See example:
Already in Madrid the warm winds of June, felt like a soft wind of a fan; in which the leaves supported by the branches swing gentle in the air.
asked Apr 04 '12 at 00:42
Ana M Pena
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Ana M Pena
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"In Madrid, the warm June winds blow like the soft breeze of a fan, gently swinging tree branches and rustiling their leaves."
It's still a bit wordy, but it is rather poetic.
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answered Apr 04 '12 at 03:23
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