Use of articles
When I started the review it changed my "the building" into just "building". Does that make sense?
For example, when he shows a mini flashback of Edward and his father, he gives the inside of the building a mechanical look as well as a mysterious and dark sound effect.
No, that doesn't make sense. But there is some confusion in the sentence after that. You are saying that he gives the inside of the building two things: a mechanical look, and a dark sound effect. Is the sound effect part of the building or part of the scene?
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