Use of articles


When I started the review it changed my "the building" into just "building". Does that make sense?

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For example, when he shows a mini flashback of Edward and his father, he gives the inside of the building a mechanical look as well as a mysterious and dark sound effect.
asked Jan 14 '14 at 02:19 Sammi Baughn New member

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No, that doesn't make sense. But there is some confusion in the sentence after that. You are saying that he gives the inside of the building two things: a mechanical look, and a dark sound effect. Is the sound effect part of the building or part of the scene?

link comment answered Jan 14 '14 at 03:33 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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