Another passive voice use
how do i fix this
See example:
The company I am employed with was sold and a year ago, so with the unknown of having a job in the next couple of the month, I decide to return to school.
asked Apr 02 '12 at 18:01
gerri
New member
gerri
New member
1 answer 
More concisely and more actively -- "I decided to return to school because my employer was sold, and I did not know whether I would keep my job."
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answered Apr 02 '12 at 19:01
Jeff Pribyl
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