Trying to avoid a run-on sentence

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All the information in the text example need to be included in one sentence.

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For the length of the Agreement, University has and will maintain all necessary authorizations and approvals necessary with each Facility, which allows Students on or about the Facility's premises to engage in practical learning and clinical experiences under a provider's supervision, such authorizations and approvals shall include without limit an Affiliation Agreement or other such similar agreement with each Facility.
asked Dec 27 '13 at 18:09 Rachel New member

I'm not sure why it all has to be in one sentence, but it sounds like you need a lawyer for this one. Aaron?

Patty TDec 27 '13 at 18:15

There is no legal requirement for all of this to be in one sentence. I also don't see a reason for the garrulous litigious lawyer inside of you to make an unnecessarily convoluted and esoteric run-on sentence. More power to you. The affiliation agreements are not yet formalized and thus have no proper name. Don't capitalize them like they are legally binding and enforceable contracts with the "facilities" until they are actually formed.

Aaron PrejeanDec 27 '13 at 21:25

My rule of thumb is: if my inner lawyer feels the need to legally cover my ass, I probably need to hire a lawyer.

Patty TDec 28 '13 at 04:08

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The run-on occurs after 'supervision', so how about replacing that comma with a semicolon?

link answered Dec 29 '13 at 20:28 palmer New member

Thanks!

RachelJan 09 at 21:54

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