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Dear All ,

Further to my last email, I would like to brush with you up ,as after conducting several meetings with asset managers, We came up with “Morgan Stanley “one of the top 5 ranking in the equity management as shown in the attached.

Moreover , Morgan Stanley is one of the first global banks with a strong presence in the middle east added they carry a team of expertise with a combination of local knowledge and international perspective ,Nevertheless their investment philosophy based on active & the fundamental analysis approach , In the Attached you will find all performance details along with investment guideline that we agreed on with the portfolio manager .

We seek your fast action as we want to take an advantage of the current boom in Saudi Market IPO activity picking up, as numerous of companies will go public from 10 to 14 IPO on the CMA pipeline for 2014.

I hope our proposal will be to your satisfaction so we can take to the next approval level.

Regards

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Moreover , Morgan Stanley is one of the first global banks with strong presence in the middle east added they carry a team of expertise with a combination of local knowledge and international perspective ,Nevertheless their investment philosophy based on active & the fundamental analysis approach , In the Attached you will find all performance details along with investment guideline that we agreed on with the portfolio manager .
asked Dec 26 '13 at 06:08 nouf New member

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Patty TDec 26 '13 at 10:16

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