Why should I remove more in the sentence below, it sounds funny in pronounciation.

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Conflicts and natural disasters have increased the dependency on wildplant resources and these have more than any other food sources including relief foods in saving lives of a number of famine victims because of the unique character of being easily available and affordable by all.

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Conflicts and natural disasters have increased the dependency on wildplant resources and these have more than any other food sources including relief foods in saving lives of a number of famine victims because of the unique character of being easily available and affordable by all .
asked Dec 12 '13 at 23:20 Sylvester Ogbunuju New member

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You should not delete "more," but the sentence has some grammatical errors and therefore needs to be reworded:

 

Conflicts and natural disasters have increased the dependency on wildplant resources. These resources have contributed more than any other food sources, including relief food packages, in saving the lives of a number of famine victims because of their unique characteristics of being easily available and affordable to all.

 

Hope this helps!

link comment answered Dec 13 '13 at 09:06 Joyce F Contributor

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