people enroll in college to study and achieve life-longgoals
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People enroll in college to study and achieve life-longgoals.
You need a space between 'long' and 'goals'. You don't achieve life-long goals in college, but gain the knowledge to do so. Replace 'and' with 'toward' and change 'achieve' to 'achieving'.
People enroll in college to study toward achieving life-long goals.
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