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whats wrong with this, how should I rewrite it

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I picked this specialty because I wanted to continue to interact with the patients while having more autonomy in my practice.
asked Nov 30 '13 at 11:28 guerlyne New member

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 I picked this specialty because I wanted to continue to interact with  patients while having more autonomy in my practice.

link comment answered Dec 07 '13 at 09:19 Sanjay Expert

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