can you tell me what is a matter with this sentence
Aperson at a young age, who has the first bipolar disorder, rapid-cycling is more common
A person at a young age who has the first bipolar disorder rapid -cycling disorder is more common.
Definitions from wikipedia:
- 'bipolar disorder' is a mental illness.
- 'rapid-cycling' is when a subject suffers four or more bipolar disorder episodes in a year.
Your sentence is like a cause/effect statement with two clauses. The two parts need a separating comma. I rearranged a bit to make more sense. (although I do not know whether your assertion is medically correct)
If a person's first bipolar disorder occurs at a young age, rapid-cycling is common.
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