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i do not understand the part synonyms when i press on it (all recommend)what does this mean

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With the improvement of the economic situation for many people has inhanced the number of cars owners, especially teenagers.
asked Nov 26 '13 at 20:45 fatima New member

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I can't help you with your software question. You'll need to contact support for that. I can help you with this sentence.

Your sentence doesn't have a subject.  You are trying to use the introductory prepositional phrase as a subject, but you can't do this. If you remove just the first word, 'with', 'improvement' becomes the subject and the sentence will make sense.  'Enhanced' is spelled with an 'e', and get in the habit of always capitalizing the word 'I'.

 

The improvement of the economic situation for many people has enhanced the number of cars owners, especially teenagers.

This is now grammatically correct, but it can be improved and simplified.

'Economic situation for many people' can be shortened to 'economy' without changing your meaning.

'Increase' is a better word in this context than 'enhanced'. 

 

The improvement of the economy has increased the number of cars owners, especially teenagers.

link comment answered Nov 26 '13 at 21:50 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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