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how can i make the sentence better

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Over 95% of Puerto Ricos' population speaks Spanish and fewer than 20 % are proficient in English according to a source.
asked Nov 25 '13 at 13:33 Ligne Duran New member

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It should be Puerto Rico's, not Ricos'.  You need a comma after 'Spanish' and another after 'English'.  I would recommend citing the source rather than calling it 'a source'. I just substituted 'PR Chamber...'

 

Over 95% of Puerto Rico's population speaks Spanish, and fewer than 20% are proficient in English, according to the Puerto Rico Chamber of Commerce.

link comment answered Nov 25 '13 at 14:54 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow
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I also like to use the words "more than" rather than "over".

link comment answered Nov 25 '13 at 21:30 Susan Smith New member

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