How does this make sense

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how would I even change this?

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FDR created the SSA ), which allowed a part of a person's monthly paycheck to be put aside each month toward a retirement fund.
asked Nov 24 '13 at 08:43 Tamia Arias New member

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There are many ways any sentence could be rewritten. I have no idea what "this" is that you refer to in your question. I can see two issues with the sentence. There should only be a comma after SSA. Delete the space and single parenthesis. "Allow" implies that there is some choice in the matter. SSA takes all choice out of the matter, so "allow" isn't a great word choice.

link comment edited Nov 24 '13 at 16:57 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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