how I should crrcsion the grammer?

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I continued couple of months and still I love this job, busy area it is really hard work excellent place because there were all of country peoples to opportunities to see in the Olympic area it was marvellous and really good experience .
asked Nov 23 '13 at 20:57 kamalarani Ratnasingam New member

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I've read this several times, and I can't make any sense out of it. A sentence should contain a coherent thought, but you've started off talking about a job, then went into talking about country people (or people from another country, maybe), and finally about the Olympics.


Break this up into shorter sentences that deal with a single subject first, then post them back here and someone can help you.

link comment answered Nov 23 '13 at 21:31 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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