is there an error in these two sentences

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They're intimidating animals to see in the wild.     Scary dogs that sound as they're laughing when they bark.

asked Nov 19 '13 at 17:46 Kim New member

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While I cannot pinpoint a grammar error in the first snetence, "to see" sounds a bit awkward. It would read better as "In the wild, these animals appear intimidating." 

 

The second sentence is not complete, so I suggest ending the previous sentence with a colon and using lower-case "s" in "scary." Also, "sound as" needs to be revised as "sound like" or "sound as though."

 

Hope this helps!

link comment answered Nov 20 '13 at 07:24 Joyce F Contributor

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