is there an error in these two sentences


They're intimidating animals to see in the wild.     Scary dogs that sound as they're laughing when they bark.

asked Nov 19 '13 at 17:46 Kim New member

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While I cannot pinpoint a grammar error in the first snetence, "to see" sounds a bit awkward. It would read better as "In the wild, these animals appear intimidating." 


The second sentence is not complete, so I suggest ending the previous sentence with a colon and using lower-case "s" in "scary." Also, "sound as" needs to be revised as "sound like" or "sound as though."


Hope this helps!

link comment answered Nov 20 '13 at 07:24 Joyce F Contributor

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