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Not cold and not hot, she sways he fingers through it.

(I'm talking about water)

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It is neither cold nor hot. She sways her fingers through it.

link comment answered Nov 16 '13 at 04:00 Sanjay Expert
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link comment answered Nov 22 '13 at 07:12 Qurrota A'yuni New member
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I would not use sway in this context.  Perhaps she swirls her fingers through it. 

link answered Nov 16 '13 at 05:51 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

I'm unsure what the downvote is for. As a native speaker, I have never heard anyone sway their fingers. The word does not fit.

Patty TNov 16 '13 at 16:09

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