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By encouraging, stockholders participation in the formation of the coalition would be showing them the company involvement in this venture would be a way to build stakeholders partnership, provide an opportunity to discover business opportunities and turning vision into the financial performance

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By encouraging, stockholders participation in the formation of the coalition would be showing them the company involvement in this venture would be a way to build stakeholders partnership, provide an opportunity to discover business opportunities and turning vision into the financial performance .
asked Nov 04 '13 at 03:55 Isabella Reeves New member

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