Help with passive voice

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How can I make this sound more active?

See example:

My grandfather was diagnosed with prostate cancer and later passed away.
asked Nov 03 '13 at 20:23 Monisha Bruner New member

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A sentence is not more or less active or passive.  It's either one or the other. In active voice, the subject performs the action of the verb. In passive voice, the subject receives this action.  To change your sentence to active voice, you will need to introduce a new subject to perform the action of diagnosis.

 

The doctor diagnosed my grandfather with prostate cancer, who later passed away.

link comment answered Nov 03 '13 at 20:45 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow
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My grandfather passed away ,the doctor diagnosed him with prostate cancer .

link comment answered Nov 06 '13 at 19:50 Mahjabin Andar New member

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