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please how can i improve this sentence

"CGA provides more protecting for the IPv6 neighbourhood router discovery mechanism and allows the user to provide a "proof of ownership" for a particular IPv6 address."

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CGA provides more protecting for the IPv6 neighbourhood router discovery mechanism and allows the user to provide a "proof of ownership" for a particular IPv6 address.
asked Oct 22 '13 at 19:27 Mohammed New member

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Change 'protecting' to 'protection'.  I believe the term is 'neighbour discovery protocol' rather than 'neighbourhood router discovery mechanism'.  I may be wrong; it's been years since I've dealt with IP protocols, so check me out on that.

 

CGA provides more protection for the IPv6 neighbour discovery protocol and allows the user to provide a "proof of ownership" for a particular IPv6 address.

link comment answered Oct 22 '13 at 20:40 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow
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link comment answered Oct 23 '13 at 00:29 maytee florido New member

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