incomplete comparisons

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I simply cannot grasp what grammarly is trying to convey when stating this is an incomplete comparison. How may I restate this?

 

This study seeks to demonstrate a need for innovative leadership strategies to remove existing U.S. discriminations against female faculty in higher educational by revealing inequities in areas of salaries, advancement opportunities, and leadership positions.

asked Oct 18 '13 at 00:55 Bekki Turner New member

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I think I finally found the culprit. You used the term 'higher educational'.  The software sees 'higher' and looks to find what it's higher than and flags it.  Change to 'higher education' and ignore any flags.

 

This study seeks to demonstrate a need for innovative leadership strategies to remove existing U.S. discriminations against female faculty in higher education by revealing inequities in areas of salaries, advancement opportunities, and leadership positions.

link comment answered Oct 18 '13 at 01:31 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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