faulty parallel structure

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There are reality shows that focus on family dynamics, shows concentrating on romance, and on extreme situations.

asked Mar 21 '12 at 22:37

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Or shorter still:

Reality shows can focus on family dynamics, romance, and extreme situations.

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answered Mar 22 '12 at 08:10

Just simplify it:

There are reality shows that focus on family dynamics, romance, and extreme situations.

If you want shorter:

Various reality shows focus on family dynamics, romance, and extreme situations.

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answered Mar 21 '12 at 22:53

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