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There are reality shows that focus on family dynamics, shows concentrating on romance, and on extreme situations.

asked Mar 21 '12 at 22:37 Leslie Warren McDaniel New member

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Or shorter still:

 

Reality shows can focus on family dynamics, romance, and extreme situations.

link comment answered Mar 22 '12 at 08:10 Peter Rosenbaum New member
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Just simplify it:

 

There are reality shows that focus on family dynamics, romance, and extreme situations.
 

If you want shorter:

 

Various reality shows focus on family dynamics, romance, and extreme situations.

link comment answered Mar 21 '12 at 22:53 Courtney Contributor

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