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My first job in America was in an orthopedic hospital in Florida, later within a few year we moved to Texas near to our friends and families, and I work in an acute care hospital as an Assistant Nurse Manager .
asked Oct 11 '13 at 19:27 siny kumbattu New member

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The sentence is long and you have two independent clauses join by only a comma - a comma splice. Break this into two sentences, and you will be correct.

 

My first job in America was in an orthopedic hospital in Florida.  Within a few years, we moved to Texas to be near our friends and families, and I work in an acute care hospital as an Assistant Nurse Manager.

link comment answered Oct 11 '13 at 20:12 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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