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it is for a video script on plastic surgery patient reviews

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When working with your patients to tell their stories about how they felt before and after the surgery, we can build your reputation as not just another great plastic surgeon, but as a plastic surgeon that really cares about their patients, and their patient's lives.
asked Oct 10 '13 at 18:59 Craig Stephens New member

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I've been trying to think of a way to smooth this out, Craig.  Depending on how you are using this information in your video, you might not have to entirely worry about grammar and punctuation.  The spoken word is less formal and often contains incomplete sentences.  This seems more like a job for a marketing expert.

link comment answered Oct 11 '13 at 00:38 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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