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It was a summer holiday, so dad drove the car with mum, little Max and baby Kim to the seaside.

asked Oct 04 '13 at 12:20 Noel Jones New member

You posed this same exact question last week.

Patty TOct 04 '13 at 14:07

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Correction:

It (a vague word to start) was a summer holiday, so my father drove every one in my family to the seaside. 

 

If you resent to my sentence, then inform me to fix it. 

 

Thanks!

link answered Oct 05 '13 at 03:57 ducdang123 Contributor

Thank to whoever thumbed up this answer!

ducdang123Oct 05 '13 at 20:37

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