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how should I rewrite this sentence to make clear?

See example:

Harvey (the protagonist) who has been alienated by his people since he left town is the body that Jim and the others brought into the house.
asked Oct 03 '13 at 16:45 Blanca A Curtis New member

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This might help:

Harvey, the protagonist, alienated by his people since he left town, is the body that Jim and the others brought into the house.

If order doesn't matter to you, this might work better (note bold words):

The body that Jim and the others brought into the house is that of Harvey, the protagonist, who had been alienated by his people since he left town.

What's more, you probably mean to use "…was the body that…" or "…was that of…" in the above examples, respectively. But I'm not sure about the phrasing you're using before this sentence, so maybe not.

link comment answered Oct 03 '13 at 17:16 Greg deJong Contributor
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Jim and the others briought in to house  a body ,hom aliemated by his people since he left town ,It was protagonist  Harvey body .

 

Harvey the protagonist , since  he left the town ,he alienated by his  people ,the body Jim and the others brought into the house that was his body .

link comment answered Oct 04 '13 at 03:26 Mahjabin Andar New member

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