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How do I reword this sentance? Arrrrrr.... I have so much trouble with squinting modifiers (although I think the name is cute)

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They also went out of their way to not to hire females because of the isolated stations and the extra expenses to accommodate them.
asked Mar 18 '12 at 17:58 Sue Walker New member

Females were not employed because of the isolated stations and the extra expenses required to accommodate women

Deborah DanielsMar 24 '12 at 01:55

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Because of the extra expenses needed to accommodate females, and the isolated nature of the stations, they also went out of their way to avoid hiring women.

link comment answered Mar 24 '12 at 13:04 Steven List Contributor

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