modifier
How do I reword this sentance? Arrrrrr.... I have so much trouble with squinting modifiers (although I think the name is cute)
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They also went out of their way to not to hire females because of the isolated stations and the extra expenses to accommodate them.
asked Mar 18 '12 at 17:58
Sue Walker
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Sue Walker
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Because of the extra expenses needed to accommodate females, and the isolated nature of the stations, they also went out of their way to avoid hiring women.
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answered Mar 24 '12 at 13:04
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Females were not employed because of the isolated stations and the extra expenses required to accommodate women
– Deborah Daniels – Mar 24 '12 at 01:55 add comment